Date: 2009-10-31 09:09 pm (UTC)
OMG! This is all kinds of brilliant. Allow me to expound:

The "and you call yourself a Slytherin" implication that Al is a better Slytherin than Scorpius. Perfect!

Scorpius' pouting and Al's sweet understanding while still not backing down.

Lastly, and most awesomely, the "glisten" line. That walks up and down hilarious! Great work. :D
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